Chapter 2 Open Book

When my sister told me that this chapter had the name open book I about laughed. Obviously her readers were about to quit reading it at this point. I don't blame them.

CHAPTER 2

The beginning wasn't bad until she said her day was horrible because Edward wasn't there. Just to recap, Edward does not seem to like Bella at all. So, why would you want someone who does not like you to be around? It would make my day if he didn't show up! 

What is up with this author's grammar? She starts 3 sentences within the same page with the same conjunction. The grammar is killing the reader (my sis) and the blogger (me).

Bella reminds me of a stalker I once knew. She's always looking out for Edward. A friend of mine, we'll call her Susie ( not her real name), she planned her lunch schedule at school so she could always run into a guy she liked. Susie is not like that anymore, but Bella seems to stay that way.

Another error has been found. "...and wrote my mom more bogusly cheerful e-mail." Either she meant one more or she forgot to put a "s" on the end of e-mail. It doesn't sound right at all.

Where I live it doesn't snow often. When it does everybody gets excited, even thought we don't know how to drive in it. Bella however thinks that snow is "Ew". I understand if it's a blizzard and you can't get anywhere. That would get annoying. Snow is fun to me. Just my personal opinion. 

Bella sees Edward after some time of him being away. She still infatuated with Edward for some unknown reason, although he appears to still not like her. This girl needs to find another guy quickly.

When Edward sits next to Bella in Biology for the 2nd time he says "hello" in a musical voice. This is NOT High School Musical, last time I checked.

Bella describes Edward's eyes as "careful". That doesn't make any sense. He's acting like she's poisonous or something.

Now Edward has a musical voice and enchanting laugh. Again this is not High School Musical. It'd be so funny if he broke out into song it'd sound something like this:

"Together together all vampires,

together together let's eat Bella!"

I mean really, let's make this story actually interesting.....

If anyone knows a person with a "beautiful crooked smile", please let me know. Every time I see someone who smiles crooked I think they have an issue with me or they're in pain.

After Bella and Edward are done with Biology she says she's trying not to look at him. She does and he has a look of frustration in his eyes. I got the funniest image of Edward having constipation problems. 

This Chapter has nothing really interesting except her making small talk with Edward. I really hope the next chapter is more interesting ideas because I want to go to sleep hearing my sis read this book. If anyone has any suggestions just let me know.